The crystal raindrops falling
and the far-off snow geese calling
sound a warning
“Summer’s drawing to a close.”
Now the Autumn leaves turn golden
and the laughing summer children
hurry while the gates stand open
for one last ride.
Soon the ponies will stand silent
shrouded in their winter wrappings,
with their panoply of trappings
hidden from admiring view.
But the children will remember
even deep in cold December
and see reflected in the embers
the flash of sparkling eyes.
Then they’ll hear the lilting music
in their minds while tapping to it
little toes will strike a rhythm
set in bold three-quarter time.
There are carousels in places
where the summer never races
to the waiting arms of winter
bright with snow.
But they’re never held more dearly
or treasured more sincerely
than those who fly so briefly
in the fleeting summer sun.
c.2010, Donna Swanson
remarkable.
This is wonderful, Donna. It has such a musical flow to it. Very nicely done!
Hello again. I left the the wrong link in the previous comment. My story for this prompt is: The Last Grain of Sand – http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/11/23/the-last-grain-of-sand/
amazing writing….
I adore carousels and this is such a beautiful tribute to their enjoyment. Your writing is so lovely, Donna.
Thank you, Kay! your words are always an encouragement. Donna
Brought back memories of my childhood and the happy times I had when I visited the carnival with my parents. When I knew winter was on the way, I’d be so sad but my dad would always remind me that the carousel with the ponies and the duck boats would be waiting for me once the snow melted. He always made me feel like they were missing me, so it made it bearable. LOL!